Friday, February 8, 2013

February 8, 2013

Learning Objective: Critically edit/annotate for good writing techniques; revise for argument and explanation
Agenda:

  • CSAP paragraph--edit for grammar mistakes (15)
  • Body paragraph redux!

  • Check-in with me on 1/2 sheet (5)
  • More sample BP's (10)
  • F3 (5)
  • Work time on BP #2 or revising BP#1 (class)
HW: BP #2 due on Tuesday

1) Correcting the Paragraph
CSAP Practice!  
Find the 15 mistakes in the Paragraph below!
P.S.
On the back of this paper(we turned in) we put how we felt we are doing on our research paper and what you are worried about.
         
         Believe it or not, rap has been around for over 23 year's. In fact, the first rap tune to be pressed on vinyl was Rapper's Delight by the Sugarhill Gang in the late 70s. Since then rap has evolved from a fad to a streat party. Rao music is an element of a more larger culture that encompasses rap, baggy clothing, break-dancing, graffiti, vocabulary, and, a general lifestyle this popular culture is generally referred too as hip-hop. Rap made it's way to are shores as early as 1983. DJ blaze, one of the best known hip-hop DJs in south Africa, first got into it in 1983 when a movie called Beat Street was showing in his neighborhood. "I began DJing in 1990" he states. " I liked the scratching and the mixing".

2) Fun Video Friday
YouTube- A Pep Talk From Kid President

3) F3
F3 is to be used in your google docs. If you push F3, a search box will show up, and you can search anything in your paper

4) The rest of the class we worked on our BP(Body Paragraphs)


By: Charlie Leonard

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